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4-14-21 (copy 01)
You're killin' me Smalls...
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This Frontline Flea and Tick Spray ad allow humans to become a part of it. How clever.
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How's Your Cold Email Game?
First impressions are everything, especially with email.Too often, our opening email lines are butchered beyond belief.The sales folks at Hubspot did a deep dive into opening lines that miss the mark.Here they are:
"My name is..." - Just get rid of it. Go right to the second sentence.
"I work for..." - This line screams, "I'm trying to sell you something."
"Did you know..." - Using stats are good and well but don't drop them in your first few sentences.
"I've been thinking..." - Don't come out of the gate with self-interest.
"I hope you're doing well..." - It doesn't get any blander than this.
"Did you find what you're looking for?" - This line serves a purpose, but it has to be way more specific.
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Today's Challenge
Cold emailing someone today? Don't use any of the lines above.
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